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makamu ([personal profile] makamu) wrote in [personal profile] pronker 2023-01-13 07:43 pm (UTC)

Yeah, and it's no more than about three sentences, or shorter? It's quite effective and then the story swings back to "real time."

"No exposition dumps" is always good as a goal - but it also can be hard.
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