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Dear Diary, I feel rested only when at home.

Today was the long-awaited day when I was discharged from the Halls. I tottered feebly into my own sleep chamber, which looked exactly as it did when I left it that fatal morning. My slippersox were still beside the bed, my Temple-issued sleep shifts hanging on the floor of the closet, and everything had a musty smell, like someone fumigated while I was gone. All it needed was a yellow warning tape across the door.

My comm station blinked with incoming messages, including one with the special strobe from Mandalore, but I was too tired to get at it.

I'd have liked a glass of fruit juice, but there's no buzzer to ring for the healer. A back rub would certainly feel good right now, Diary. There was nobody to tuck me into bed, nobody to bring my supper in on a tray, nobody to wake me up tomorrow and ask me how we feel this morning.

At least, I had comforted myself, everybody would be waiting impatiently to hear about my operation. This illusion was rudely shattered. It turned out that all my friends have had one just like it, only worse. I've been trying to talk about my own operation ever since I had it, but I couldn't find anybody to listen. On the way back here, shuffling slowly down the last sixteen corridors, friends ducked into doorways when they saw me coming.

My bed never had these lumps before, surely? Although it hadn't the unstable feel of that vibrating air mattress in the Halls, either. I must be grateful for little things, Diary.

ding dong dinnnnngggg donnnnnggggg

I punch the annunciator grille, Sensing a presence that I had not felt in --- "Anakin, come in!" Of course, he would be the one to welcome me back, because who else, Diary? A back rub is going to feel so relaxing. I think I'll even allow him to read my entries. You were a gift from him, after all.

I spare a final glance at the holozine puzzle that Newsvendor left with me. 'Angst' anagrams to 'gnats,' and oh here is one buzzing near which must have hitchhiked in on my clothing.

"I'll get rid of it for you, Master." The softened timbre of his voice is couched to my still sensitive ears, I suppose. He's entered the sleep chamber unnoticed while I was settling in.

"Don't bother, Anakin. It'll find its own way out, or not." I smile up at my good friend. "I don't mind."

IOIOIOIOIO

The End.

IOIOIOIOIO

A/N Written as a byproduct of many hours spent visiting the sick, in one hospital or another.

Date: 2014-11-12 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Oh I love how you work the "angst" in after all! Hee! If not in the traditional sense :)
Poor Obi-Wan. Now he appreciates certain things about the hospital.

Sensing a presence that I had not felt in
*snicker*

Surely he wouldn't let Anakin read the bit about wanting him to leave! That might make him emo and... fall right into the welcoming arms of the Chancellor. Oh yes, Anakin, go ahead and read that one. Bwahaha!

Date: 2014-11-13 04:25 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] praiseofshadows.livejournal.com
I've been trying to talk about my own operation ever since I had it, but I couldn't find anybody to listen.

SO SO TRUE! You have captured the essence of all hospital stays (and procedures!). Also, re: the last part with Ahoska and the request for speeder keys! AWESOMENESS and you know she and Barriss will trash it again XDDD

Date: 2014-11-18 02:42 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] praiseofshadows.livejournal.com
The speeder will never be the same and All-Jedi Insurance will total it; the next one Obi-Wan will never loan out. I often wonder what it was like for him to be basically Anakin's dad -- like Anakin took everything apart and/or totaled it! Poor Obi-Wan! No wonder he totally turned towards the "non ownership" thing

Wasn't last night's Agents of SHIELD bodacious??

Sadly, I have been too busy and/or ill to watch the last two weeks -- I've got my fingers crossed I can catch up this weekend! Then I will totally squee over it with you! ♥

re: Gnats pt 5

Date: 2014-12-23 09:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] a-blue-moon-cat.livejournal.com
Good ending that sums up things between hospital and home rather well. :)
Edited Date: 2014-12-23 09:51 am (UTC)

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